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Layover
Author: AlwaysCocked
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(Added on May 31, 2003)
(This month 188533 readers) (Total 289286 readers) |
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The first chapter in a long science fiction novel set in the not too distant future about a planet on the far edge of the galaxy where just about everything is legal, and a ship's crew on shore leave there. |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Amars
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Jun 13, 2011 |
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Yes, excellent! Would pay for published version.
Like everyone else I am wanting more. Thanks for sharing your work. (10/10)
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mkemse
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Jan 23, 2009 |
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outstanding (10/10)
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Inferno
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Sep 6, 2008 |
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Excelent story, with a well developed characters and very full plot which I'd love to know the rest of. If you ever decided to publish this, I'd definitely buy it. (10/10)
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J's blu
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May 23, 2006 |
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*the girl falls off her chair, pulling at her hair in FRUSTRATION!!* where can i buy this book?? i need to know what happens to everyone, do they ever get off the planet? does she take the job? please tell me where i can find out. (10/10)
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kendw
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Dec 22, 2004 |
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This story has a well-developed plot, with characters that are quite realistic. It works on many levels. I hope to see it finished! (10/10)
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Dododecapod
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Nov 28, 2004 |
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Amazingly, I could find nothing to criticize. There's a nice balance between story and eros, and some thought has been given to how extreme sexuality could become in a totally permissive society with extreme bio-modification technology.
I am looking forward to what happens to the oligarch, however; I don't believe he'll like the end he comes to, somehow.
Just read part 25. Glad you're still continuing this! (10/10)
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warren_Z
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Jan 18, 2004 |
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Very imaginative and erotic. The author does a super job with character development. The story is intriguing and the plot carries. I am looking forward to the subsequent chapters. (10/10)
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smiley010
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Jul 28, 2003 |
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A very good read. Many Thanks (9/10)
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ojimbo
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Jun 7, 2003 |
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The sci-fic settings are very well described. The pace of the naration is even.
The continuity is perfect. The character development is through. There is a plot.
I want to see how this story develops. I might be interested in publishing this work
ojimbo (9/10)
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