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A Good Team Author: Woolfighter
(Added on Mar 21, 2003) (This month 63821 readers) (Total 126053 readers)
Patricia Johnson owns a company but slowly becomes owned herself by it.

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Weighed Average (?): (8/10)
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Reviewer: street0 (Edit) Rating: Sep 19, 2007
An excellent story of systematic humiliation.
I'd recommend shorter paragraphs and some spell-checking, though.:)
(8/10)

Reviewer: Dürrer (Edit) Rating: Sep 30, 2004
(5/10)
Replied by: woolfighter (Edit) (Sep 30, 2004)
Zu Tode schreiben tust du dich wahrhaftig nicht.
Trotzdem Danke fürs Lesen.

Reviewer: Wyn (Edit) Rating: Feb 10, 2004
Good premise. Good story. Awaiting further chapters. (8/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Jan 18, 2004
i like the way it is written, with sole concentration of each female victim, hope there is more to come (9/10)
Replied by: woolfighter (Edit) (Jan 18, 2004)
Thx. There is more to come. I've stuff in my head for at least 2 or 3 more chapters
Replied by: mkemse (Edit) (Feb 16, 2004)
i can understand not having good english, the fact that you acknowlefdge tihsm akes it so as i read more, i know you are aware of it, i would rather have "poor engflish" then not have the story in english at all, i do not read anything but english, so i applaud you for making a sheer effort to inprove yours
please email me when new chapters are posted

Reviewer: jbowler65 (Edit) Rating: Dec 6, 2003
This story is extremely promising, but I cannot rate it highly due to the extreme numbers of mistakes. An editor and some proofreading is definately needed. On the plus side, the premise is very good. Hopefully the author can find an editor and make this a top notch story. (5/10)

Reviewer: johnnytoobad (Edit) Rating: Nov 22, 2003
Excellent story. One of the best. I like the way each woman is humiliated and debased and then straight on to the next one. May you could have a reluctant husband who is forced to go along with it, but not happy about his wife being used. I like the idea of susan perhaps not being fully accepting, but still unable to resist.
Please keep writing.
(9/10)
Replied by: woolfighter (Edit) (Jan 18, 2004)
You'll get your reluctant husband in part 7 or 8.
Thx for the suggestion

Reviewer: Emily (Edit) Rating: Nov 6, 2003
An absolutely fabulous story. I know I am pushing it here with this rating since there is some weakness in the writing, but the delicious shifting of scene after scene of humiliation is breathless. Well done!! (10/10)
Replied by: woolfighter (Edit) (Nov 6, 2003)
Thx, really, thank you. I'm giving my best to improve my english and with reviews like yours, I'll double my efforts. And, as I see things, the important part is 'what' you tell, more then how you tell it.

Reviewer: frenchgus (Edit) Rating: Nov 1, 2003
thanks (9/10)

Reviewer: emman (Edit) Rating: May 2, 2003
Very good story,I hope that you will more about bossy, the humiliation of that women is so well imagined!! Keep up the good work! (9/10)
Replied by: woolfighter (Edit) (Feb 12, 2004)
Thx for your comments. By now I've a lot of work, but don't worry you'll hear about bossy.<br>C U

Reviewer: emmaadmirer (Edit) Rating: Apr 7, 2003
WOW!
I hope there will be more about bossy and the poor wife (not trying to influence you) (9/10)
Replied by: woolfighter (Edit) (Apr 8, 2003)
Emmaadmirer!!! Wow!!! You are one of my favorits, thx for writing. Yes of course there will be more.
C U
Woolfighter

Reviewer: dolll (Edit) Rating: Apr 6, 2003
Hey there,
This story made me hot! I'd give it a 9... but I think the writing could be tightened up a bit. That's the easy part... You have the majic in your mind! (7/10)
Replied by: woolfighter (Edit) (Apr 8, 2003)
I hope the sequel achieves your 9.
C U
woolfighter

Reviewer: rainee (Edit) Rating: Mar 21, 2003
A great start...would like to see more!! A great imagination at work... (8/10)
Replied by: woolfighter (Edit) (Apr 8, 2003)
Always working at the updates, just wait and see.
C U
Woolfighter

Reviewer: jasbrico (Edit) Rating: Mar 21, 2003
Love the humiliation theme. Peter's definitely my favorite character. Can't wait for the next installments!! Keep up the great work Woolfighter!! (8/10)

Reviewer: YNHumiliator (Edit) Rating: Mar 21, 2003
Humiliation aspects are very good indeed. Great story so far. (8/10)

Reviewer: koalas (Edit) Rating: Mar 21, 2003
Very good, I love the way Patricia is humiliated. Hope there is more. (8/10)

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