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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
(Edit) |
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Apr 10, 2004 |
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i realy wish despite my rating that you had stuck with your original concept and idea (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Nitrofox
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Mar 23, 2003 |
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This is a fantastic story. I as well am not a great fan of spanking, however the writing, spelling and grammar all appeared excellent. The plot was much more well-defined than most stories on this site (in fact I can only think of one better), but compounded into so little (comparatively, the other story is some 750KB) this is easily competitive. Character development is apparent, and you can actually see what people are feeling, instead of not comprehending one jot of what they think, like in other stories I've read. The story is a bit short, and perhaps expanding the sex scene would make it a bit longer, however the <I>Excellent</I> plot and the wonderfully defined characters who are not mere measurements and "better than Playboy centerfolds" make up for the few lacking elements completely. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Terry Gabriola
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Mar 21, 2003 |
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I was pleasantly surprised by this one; spanking's not my thing so I wasn't expecting much. Well-written and with characters who aren't the usual mere one-dimensional physical descriptions, who have thoughts and feelings: there's precious little of that on this site. The whole thing's a bit too short, and I guess the (explicit) erotic content's a bit low for many people. But it's a good piece of work. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
T-Luv
(Edit) (Mar 21, 2003)
- Thanks :-) I actually would have liked to make the third encounter a bit more detailed, but the story was written originally for a site that doesn't allow 'sex with minors' and so I chose to simply imply it, rather than describe it graphically. I considered expanding the scene for posting here, but decided to just leave it as is. I wrote this story long enough ago that I felt that added material wouldn't be as well-connected as the rest of the story.
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