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Captive In Iraq Author: Pauly
(Added on Mar 7, 2003) (This month 51806 readers) (Total 75813 readers)
Two student graduates stray to close to the Iraq / Turkish border and suffer the consequences.

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Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Apr 10, 2004
liked the story, my only wish is that you had choosen out of respect to those currently serving us, a different location, the Iraq/Iran location hits way to close to home at this present time (7/10)

Reviewer: agp_millie (Edit) Rating: Nov 5, 2003

Look forward to the next part.
Poor Mel. It just goes to prove that it's safer to accept your situation than to fight it.
(8/10)

Reviewer: boccaccio2000g (Edit) Rating: Mar 15, 2003
I always like exotic/historic settings, but the author doesn't make much of an effort to set the scene here. Nor is much of an attempt made at characterization. And there are a number of errors that prove once again (if anyone still needs to be convinced) that you just can't trust your proof-reading to those undiscerning spell-checkers:
"were stripped to the waste." "with each violet movement" "un-swallowed seaman" etc.
All that being said, I hope the author continues but that he, um, tries to get inside the characters a little more.
(4/10)

Reviewer: Tractortorture (Edit) Rating: Mar 8, 2003
Good start to the story. Wil be interestd to see how it develops (7/10)

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