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Author: Bruce Boxer
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(Added on Mar 4, 2003)
(This month 53881 readers) (Total 69762 readers) |
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Heather finds the delights of another woman and what pleasure bondage and pain can bring. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 1, 2008 |
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nicely written, very simple girl girl story (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dolbyuiop
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Sep 26, 2005 |
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Really cool work! Short, but it still packs a heck of a punch! (8/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Oct 8, 2003 |
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Hey guys, wake up and smell the roses! I has just finished reading a bunch of real junk compared to this that people were giving nines and tens to while I was giving sixes and sevens. This is really good! Boxer writes well and focuses on getting into the head of his sub. There are some novel aspects to the story. This is three times better than most of the writing on this site. Bravo! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
BruceBoxer
(Edit) (Oct 9, 2003)
- Many thanks e.e.--appreciate the kind words. Makes the effort worthwhile to know you enjoyed it.
Cheers,
Boxer
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| Reviewer:
crickette
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Oct 5, 2003 |
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I enjoyed reading your story. Even though it was short, the plot was clear. It had a begining, a middle and an end. I looked forward to reading more of your work. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
BruceBoxer
(Edit) (Oct 5, 2003)
- Thanks for reading crikette--glad you enjoyed it. I wanted to try something concise and different and hoped it would be worth.
Cheers,
Boxer
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| Reviewer:
ponygirl2000
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Aug 10, 2003 |
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ooo, i hope there's more to come in this tale :) (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
rcb
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Apr 5, 2003 |
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Better effort than 'The Sailboat' (6/10)
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- Replied by:
BruceBoxer
(Edit) (Apr 6, 2003)
- Again thanks and again this was a request from a woman--gay woman.
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| Reviewer:
Moggy
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Mar 9, 2003 |
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Good writing as usual from Mr Boxer. Definitely erotic but way too undeveloped in length and detail. I would definitely like to see an expanded version of this story. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Faibhar
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Mar 6, 2003 |
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Another fine story delivered by a master story teller. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
BruceBoxer
(Edit) (Mar 6, 2003)
- I'm humbled by the true literary master--many thanks mate.
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