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Ravaged At The Creek
Author: Trapper
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(Added on Feb 11, 2003)
(This month 54651 readers) (Total 90793 readers) |
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A nieve high school girl cuts school with a guy who has ideas, ideas the young virgin would not appreciate. But, neither of them sees. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
littleone_
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Jun 15, 2007 |
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The story had its moments and the author obviously has talent. It just never grabbed me. The plot line needs to be expanded and the story is for desperate for character development. Like tragedy3 said it is a straight-forward rape story and at level it is good; but to get beyond that the author as to expand the story. I think the author has promise and would like to see more from him where he expands his creative writing ability.
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tragedy3
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Feb 16, 2006 |
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that was a really good straight-forward rape story.boyfriend thrown in was a hot angle. good work. (10/10)
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Nitrofox
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Feb 12, 2003 |
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EXCELLENT. Very good story. Good writing, good grammar, spelling (except for "nieve" in the description, or is that a word I don't know). Good story, and fun ending.h (10/10)
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