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    Breaking Jona
    
    Author: Jona
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    (Added on Feb 11, 2003)
            (This month 58761 readers) (Total 81235 readers) | 
   
   
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    Sub Jona meets her online-Master for the first time. | 
   
 
 
   
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    | Reviewer: 
    JimmyJump
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    Jan 19, 2009 | 
   
   
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        Very well done. I love stories where the main character has this kind of mental helplessness, almost an addiction to submissiveness. Great. JJ (9/10) 
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    mkemse
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    May 30, 2006 | 
   
   
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        loved the humiliation as well as the detail in the whole story (9/10) 
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    Learn Humility
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    Aug 3, 2004 | 
   
   
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        Excellent. The humiliation was exquisite (8/10) 
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    peachmellon
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    Feb 11, 2003 | 
   
   
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        i liked it as well as enjoyed it. it was intense somewhat, that is what i enjoyed.. it reminds me a bit when i met my Master for the first time. very scared, yet excited and determined to please him..so i can put myself in Jona shoes for it. thank you so much for writing and sharing your story..  (9/10) 
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