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Tortures, Tortures and More
Author: Faibhar
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(Added on Jan 21, 2003)
(This month 59146 readers) (Total 95709 readers) |
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Ancient Romans take captive and torture a female prisoner. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
rene197903
(Edit) |
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Feb 11, 2004 |
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It sounds like you write how you talk. I actually enjoyed the historical imagery and some of the twists and turns. I got slammed by the same guy that slammed you, and that was why I read you story. I liked it. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Faibhar
(Edit) (Feb 11, 2004)
- Writing how you talk...or, vice versa can lead to plenty :) Thank you for your most generous Review, and glad that you liked.
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| Reviewer:
bcrd500
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Feb 15, 2003 |
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Story has historial hook which is very close to reality. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Faibhar
(Edit) (Feb 16, 2003)
- Dear bcrd500,
Thank you for your sage opinion. It is appreciated and I am glad that you found favor with the tale.
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| Reviewer:
RTNYMaster
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Feb 3, 2003 |
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Forget trying to use fancy words that seem forced and inappropriate. You sound like you're using a Thesauras to look up alternative words to those that would be more appropriate. You should also review your rules of grammar and punctuation. Commas aren't just inserted haphazardly. I find your stories difficult to read and lacking in substance. I've reviewed two of your stories but you don't have to worry about any more negative reviews from me because I won't be reading any more of your stories. (3/10)
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- Replied by:
Faibhar
(Edit) (Feb 4, 2003)
- Dear RTNYM,
What is the saying, something about not pleasing everyone all of the time? Sorry that you found my postings difficult to read.
As for the use of a Thesarus, I do at times refer to a dictionary, but that is all. Punctuation wise, I do try my best but never attested to being a grammatical scholar.
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| Reviewer:
jamiesonk
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Jan 26, 2003 |
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Can I say "another nice piece worthy of Faibhar" too? Unlike agp millie, I do find that the relative lack of details actually serves to stimulate more imagination. Well done! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Faibhar
(Edit) (Jan 26, 2003)
- Dear j,
Thank you, also, for your kind review. Glad you enjoyed and hope that enjoyment continues with future writings.
As for comments made by others well, suffice to say that all constructive comments are appreciated and considered. I will say, however, that your mention of stimulating imagination is very salient.
Thanks again.
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| Reviewer:
agp_millie
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Jan 23, 2003 |
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a bit lacking in detail and confusing to my small mind. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
Faibhar
(Edit) (Jan 23, 2003)
- Dear a.m.,
Thank you for your review.
Self-deprecation aside (no mind is "small") call the lack of detail you noticed a writer's style, or humble attempt to move the pace of this particular story along.
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Jan 22, 2003 |
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Is that all there is? If not I'll revise my rating when there is more to sink my teeth, in a metaphoric sense, into. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Faibhar
(Edit) (Jan 22, 2003)
- Dear L.L.,
Metaphorically your succinct review is quite a mouthful, and appreciated.
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| Reviewer:
WMassa
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Jan 22, 2003 |
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Why the hell did nobody add the "extreme"? Nice piece, nice tale-telling, a worthy Faibhar. Thanks, sad old boy! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Faibhar
(Edit) (Jan 22, 2003)
- Dear W.M.,
The extreme rating should have been self-evident. Thanks for the new appellation, e.g., sad old boy, and your review is appreciated.
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