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Weighed
Average (?):  (5/10) |
| Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
BDSM_Tourguide
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Dec 31, 2002 |
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I don't usually read snuff, but I liked this one. I thought the writing style was concise and added to the effect. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
CoffinNail
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Dec 29, 2002 |
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Interesting idea, but the execution is stilted. Not enough detail, not nearly descriptive enough. Brush up the grammar, give us more of the victims' experiences.
--CN (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
Powerone
(Edit) |
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Dec 22, 2002 |
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As usual with Pagan, he might have a good story idea but he fucks it up by writing it. I might suggest that you give your ideas to someone that at least has a grasp of the English language. In this case, even though the story is considerably harsh, I liked the idea of the story. It just takes so much away when you have to sort throught the long runny sentences, bad grammar, bad punctuation and a general lack of any writing skills. (5/10)
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