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Shipwreecked
Author: Raskolnikov
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(Added on Oct 30, 2002)
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Losing his ship in a storm a captain finds himself shipwrecked in an island ruled by women. Given a choice to either submit for life or die - he submits and finds his freedom. |
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Average (?):  (5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Aug 13, 2004 |
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I must agree with previous reviews. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
slavetobenamed
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it could use soemthing more but i do not know what. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
Moggy
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Nov 1, 2002 |
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With the writer's pen name taken from one of my favourite novels I was hoping for something of at least a little psychological depth. Instead, the story races to an unsatisfactory conclusion, and delivers very little. I suspect it's an early effort by a novice writer so I don't wish to be harsh, but I feel he has underestimated the effort required to write good erotica. Generally, a sprinkling of typo's is excusable but typing the one word title wrongly is not. A writer should take particular care with sexual body parts. It didn't happen here i.e.
"S could sense her clip peeping out" (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
boccaccio2000g
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Nov 1, 2002 |
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I'm not into F/m stories and just glanced through this one one rather quickly. Looks like it has good intensity, though.
I'm awarding the '8' because any author foolish enough to call himself 'Boccaccio' is delighted to find a kindred spirit foolish enough to call himself 'Raskolnikov' -- the brooding, angst-ridden 'hero' of "Crime and Punishment" (8/10)
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