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Tryout
Author: Dari
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(Added on Oct 19, 2002)
(This month 24945 readers) (Total 56972 readers) |
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Three girls have been captured and wake up inside a dungeon to be trained to be sex slaves by a mistress and her two helpers. one of them soon realizes that this offers to her just what she always wanted. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Jan 3, 2007 |
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The story keeps you up to the end. Excellent! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jul 31, 2004 |
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my type of story, thank you (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
sm789
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Jan 4, 2003 |
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please hurry with the next chapter. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
tink
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Dec 21, 2002 |
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The story is building very nicely. I like the discovery that the sub is going through, realizing that she actually does like what's going on... and how the Domme gets her to that point. It's very erotic!
There are some scattered grammatical/spelling errors that jarred me 'out of the mood' while I read it, which is why I didn't rate it higher (board instead of bored, etc.)
(7/10)
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| Reviewer:
clb
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Oct 25, 2002 |
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wow, more please (8/10)
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