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Beth
Author: pamela
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(Added on Oct 17, 2002)
(This month 43119 readers) (Total 98125 readers) |
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Beth tells the story of how her uncontrollable craving for pain, bondage and degradation has dominated and finally destroyed her life. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (9/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
nm.jayhawk
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Oct 11, 2010 |
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I edit and format manuscripts and plays professionally. The format for this story is not how I would have done it, but it served its purpose and didn't really interfere with my enjoyment of the work. That being said, I can't add anything to the other reviews. For my money, Pamela has a fan in any format. Excellent work. (10/10)
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JimmyJump
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Nov 1, 2008 |
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Good grief! This was at the same time a delight to read while being a rather heartbreaking experience...
The characterization of the leading-lady is so truthful that it almost hurts.
Excellent writing and perfect storytelling...
JJ (10/10)
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mirage
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Oct 4, 2007 |
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very intense strong drama-like story. The mood was depressing throughout, almost too chilling.
The story slowly build up to a decisive finale. sorry ending is perfect.
(8/10)
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RiverOtter
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Feb 27, 2007 |
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This is probably the most intense story I've read on this site, due to the sheer drama and terse writing style. People have described "worse" acts than this, but not in this personal a way. Disturbing and arousing. (8/10)
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pejanon
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Jul 6, 2005 |
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Among the best! Life-like story, a real DRAMA, and really really hot, to boot! Interplay between complicated sub and real sob of a master is intricate and simply beautiful. Excellent back-and-forth narration and supportive flashback.
Finale is shattering! Heart breaker!
(10/10)
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BigCat
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Jun 20, 2005 |
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That is some wild ride. Great job. Really pushes the envelope. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jones, Nikka
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Feb 17, 2004 |
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Excellent narrative, dialog and character development. The stuff of thermonuclear fantasy! Intense drama from begining to end. One of the top three stories in this site. (10/10)
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l_anguissette
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May 18, 2003 |
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Yes! Now THIS is the kind of story that I come here to read! It's wonderfully well-written, descriptive and imaginative. The author does a great job of writing in a very difficult style. Even though the storyline jumps around, she's successful in conveying the feelings of despair and agony in Beth. I applaud you, pamela! (9/10)
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petashley
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Dec 14, 2002 |
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Among my absolute favorite stories that i've read, i easily identify with the protagonist and her journey. As often happens for me with good stories, my only disappointment was that there wasn't more. (10/10)
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