|
|
|
|
|
Better Than Divorce
Author: Waldo Slaughter
|
| |
(Added on Sep 27, 2002)
(This month 8715 readers) (Total 21540 readers) |
| |
A man seizes the opportunity to solve his bitter divorce, but decides to also seize one more nights pleasure before making their sepeartion eternal. |
| Ratings and Reviews: |
| Number
of Ratings: 3 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
| 1 |
2 |
3 |
4 |
5 |
6 |
7 |
8 |
9 |
10 |
| 0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
33% |
33% |
33% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
|
Weighed
Average (?):  (6/10) |
| Average
Rating: (6/10) |
Highest
Rating:  (7/10) |
Lowest
Rating:  (5/10) |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
mkemse
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Mar 24, 2004 |
| |
hope there is a part 2 sometime (6/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
Grey Slayer
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Jan 26, 2004 |
| |
A good beginning, and if a second part was added I would like to read it. I am eager to learn what is in store for our lovely sleeping wife! (7/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
LaJan
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Oct 31, 2002 |
| |
Waldo, my man! I'm not sure if I should bitch-slap you for failing to finish your story before posting it or try to add the next chapter for you. If I get around to it, I'll probably do the latter. Goodness knows, I'll use Word text editing and correct those glaring punctuation and tense errors. But I don't know if I can do justice to a story that may become a snuff story. If you've read my post in the forum on that subject, you'd know that I simply 'don't go there'. With that prejudice, I don't think I'm qualified to try to complete it.<br>So that leaves you, Waldo. Since you've already seen that people are not rushing up to do it for you, you need to get it done yourself. From what I've read so far, it seems like you are up to the task, but failure to finish is just about more criminal then the stuff that has already happened in the story! I am being generous with the rating; if I was still a teacher, I'd just give you an "incomplete" and say nothing more. But I see potential in the story and you as an author. Don't prove me wrong, damn it. Get busy and do your homework, lad! Peace. (5/10)
|
|
|
About 