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The Price of Greed
Author: SpeechMasterOne
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(Added on Sep 3, 2002)
(This month 24152 readers) (Total 60822 readers) |
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A sexy woman faces two choices: Become rich, powerful and a 24/7 tease toy, or face personal and professional ruin. Hmmm, what would you choose? |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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Kingofsting
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Feb 19, 2008 |
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This story if continued has so much potetial to be the best I have ever read, I could visulize this as I read and liked the under the desk Oral images (9/10)
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sunburststrat
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Mar 24, 2005 |
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I'm a sucker for these type of f/f stories, especially when the woman being subjugated quickly begins to take pleasure in her new circumstances. I'm already a big fan, with "A Slave to Politics" by the same author, being one of my favorite stories on this site. For me, this story ended way too soon. I would have liked to hear far more about Miss Locke and Lauren, both fascinating characters.
(9/10)
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Abe Froman
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Mar 8, 2005 |
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Excellent work -- a great concept with greed drawing her in more than force or blackmail -- and the possibilities that are set up are amazing. Makes you ache for more, just to know what will happen. (9/10)
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crickette
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Aug 5, 2004 |
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I enjoyed reading The Price of Greed. It always amazes me what people will do for money. (7/10)
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quixote327
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Jul 1, 2004 |
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A great story. I hope more chapters are in the works. (10/10)
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Wmnwholves
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May 5, 2004 |
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I see from the posted date that it has been a while since this story was posted, but would to see it revisted if your muse will allow it. It as good if not better than your other story posted. (10/10)
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mkemse
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Apr 27, 2004 |
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the only thing i can ask for is MORE like this, OUTSTANDING!!!!! (10/10)
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Candy9897
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Feb 22, 2004 |
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This is a wonderful story. You must write more! (9/10)
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Jim Top
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Dec 29, 2003 |
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Excellent story. I encourage the author to write more. (9/10)
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jbowler65
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Sep 2, 2003 |
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Another excellent story. We enjoyed this one even more than A Slave to Politics. Great orgasm denial storyline. We can't wait for future parts. (10/10)
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tamerlan
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Sep 11, 2002 |
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to short (8/10)
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mskneeler
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Sep 3, 2002 |
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I adore stories of lesbian tease/torture/denial! The author Couture is also excellent at producing these. I only wish there were many, many more! (10/10)
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S_Couture
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Sep 3, 2002 |
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Another one from one of my favorite currently contributing porn authors extraordinaire.
I leaned somewhere between an eight and nine on this one. It is clearly a nine compared to other stories submitted, but with a Slave to Politics being a 10, this would rank an eight.
The hook and inventiveness are what you have come to expect from the author. Hell, I wish I came up with them. Awesome.
There were a few typos etc. but the overall writing was very good quality. The only thing I didn't like was that it was too much stuff crammed into one little short story. Personally, I would rather have had less narration about the slavery, the other slaves, the underage sex, etc. Instead, I would rather have had one or two fully described scenes.
(9/10)
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| Reviewer:
VladPotemkin
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Sep 3, 2002 |
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Excellent story with an unusual "mental bondage" twist. Believable characters, good pacing and flow. Bravo. (9/10)
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BruceCC
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Sep 3, 2002 |
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This is perhaps the best story I have ever read on the website. Grammar and spelling are both well above average. There were some missing words, which was kind of distracting, but nothing major. My only complaint is that the story ended too soon. SpeechMasterOne, you're da man! (10/10)
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