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A Summer's Night
Author: Lizard
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(Added on Jul 20, 2002)
(This month 44270 readers) (Total 86143 readers) |
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A young woman is captured and along with another captive girl are forced into a life of servitude, torture, and sexual submission. As she gets deeper into her new life, she finds that it may have been what she's always looked for. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
marci
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Oct 21, 2007 |
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i loved this story. i have fantasies about this happening to me, although i must admit it scares me to death to think that it could actually happen to me. (9/10)
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mkemse
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Apr 7, 2004 |
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it was good, any story can be improved, few authors settle for less hope you offer more as time goes on
and no, there is nothing wrong with self-permotion, look at donald trump (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Swashbuckler
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Sep 29, 2002 |
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Lizard, the story was intriguing and highly erotic.
I would have rated this higher if their were more character and plot development.
It would have been nice to see the gang developed more, as it would have been to expand on the growing closeness of Pamela and Gayle.
Fine read, thanks. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Marcus
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Jul 31, 2002 |
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Cute, but needs more attention to story layout and dialogue. (6/10)
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- Replied by:
CousinGoob
(Edit) (Jul 22, 2002)
- Thanks for your feedback. After looking at my story, I agree, it needs a little housekeeping. Look for some changes in Chapter Four. Hope you like the story when it's finished. Lizard
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| Reviewer:
Equalizer
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Jul 27, 2002 |
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Don't you hate it when people review their own stories?
CousinGoob/Apple... Have you no self respect? (1/10)
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- Replied by:
CousinGoob
(Edit) (Jul 29, 2002)
- What is worse, a plug for my story or a dishonest review by someone who obviously never read the story? If I was guilty of self-promotion then I apologize. That shouldn't detract from anyone's honest review of the story, such as the review from the dear reader named apple. Enjoy and review the story on it's own merits, nothing else. Lizard
- Replied by:
Equalizer
(Edit) (Jul 29, 2002)
- WHO'S DISHONEST???
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| Reviewer:
kemosabe
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Jul 21, 2002 |
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Has promise. . .want to see more before final judgement. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
CousinGoob
(Edit) (Jul 22, 2002)
- Keep reading, I think you'll be pleased by the end of the story. Lizard
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| Reviewer:
CousinGoob
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Jul 21, 2002 |
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What a great story. Looking forward to the subsequent chapters. I can only imagine what these two girls are going to have to go through. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
apple
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Jul 20, 2002 |
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so exciting.. want to see more (10/10)
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