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The Plight of Janice
Author: Trainman
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(Added on Jul 20, 2002)
(This month 67840 readers) (Total 113624 readers) |
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Blond, and 19, Janice is kidnapped, spread-eagled, and repeatedly sexually abused. She is then put on display and auctioned off and must submit to electrical torture and more sexual abuse. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
Highest
Rating:  (10/10) |
Lowest
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 10, 2008 |
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hope there is more to cum
my only concenr is that this is so close in textto the plight of Patti using a different name a slighty different situation but all in all the same general theme but still GREAT (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
jbowler65
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Jan 17, 2004 |
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Good story, but the ending just seemed to leave you wanting more. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
e.e. norcod
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Jan 14, 2004 |
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Good but pedestrian. As Moogy put it, "Is Jannice more than a set of enormous tits?" I don't know. The writer is obviously very enthusiastic about his creation but a bit more structure would help. As would a more definitive ending. I would really like to see the character of Janice developed more in coming episodes. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Moggy
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Jun 19, 2003 |
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No shortage of bondage and sex here and in that respect pretty good. The plot, (kidnapping, training, auction, shipment to island) are skimmed over, as is the notion that Janice has any attribute other than big tits.
7 is not as high as some of the other ratings her but rightly defines it as a worthwhile read.
(7/10)
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- Replied by:
trainman
(Edit) (Jun 24, 2003)
- Alas, I am guilty of being a breast man and since I wrote the story, I attempted to indulge my fantasy with Janice's luscious attributes. So, no apologies there. I'm glad that the bondage and sex were "pretty good," because to me, it's the primary reason for reading stories from this web site. The plot is of secondary concern for me. Thank you, however, for not only reading my story, but for writing a detailed review of it.
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| Reviewer:
veru_skjava
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Jul 21, 2002 |
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i liked this story the first time i read it, which was quite a while ago, i recall wishing then it was not so short, and am now confused by it being listed as a new story, and diappointed, i would very much enjoy more similar please. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
peachmellon
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Jul 21, 2002 |
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wow it is wonderful.. looking forward to reading more of it.. wow it was HOTTTTT>.
(10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Powerone
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Jul 20, 2002 |
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Great Story. Hope you are going to continue the submission of Janice. (9/10)
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