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The Slave Pit
Author: Unknown
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(Added on Jun 7, 2002)
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An old magic book gave him the power of controling other's mind, which made him happy along all his life. If you like nasty talks, this one has plenty of them. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Aug 28, 2007 |
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i always emjoy this type of story (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
master_wolf
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Jun 14, 2005 |
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I very much enjoyed this peice of work. Glad I had a chance to read it. However, I agree with LadyLibra, your ending seemed rushed, like you just needed to finish and get it out there. Next time, you might take a little time to think about it. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
easysue
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Jun 24, 2002 |
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Loved it. MC stories always get me off. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
LadyLibra
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Jun 16, 2002 |
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I enjoyed it, however the ending could be better (7/10)
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