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Submissive Hilary

Part 1

SUBMISSIVE HILARY

PART ONE 

     Hilary knew she was late for her appointment with her recent mistress
Jaclyn, and Jaclyn could be so touchy about those kind of things, but she
couldn't help it. She'd been busy today, her modeling career was going well,
still mostly catalog stuff, but comming along, and she went to the masseuse, and
hairstylist today. Then their was her social life, with her model like looks,
magazine face, stylish, and slender, long legs, sculpted body, small breasts (no
ones perfect! At least they were real, high and firm) there was no shortage of
men, (or women), to distract her with passes and propositions. But at 26, she
knew where her real passions lie......., exploring as an S&M submissive, with
Dom's like Jaclyn. She'd met Jaclyn a couple of months ago. She was a
professional mistress, who did life syle stuff on the side. At 39 she was
attractive, and experienced, with many years in the scene. Because she was busy
today, a night with Jaclyn, for a change, had not  filled her thoughts and kept
her panting all day. But Hillary knew that by the time she got to Jaclyn's that
would be a pretty apt description of how she felt.

     Hilary reached Jaclyn's house 15 minutes late. It was a cool, damp evening,
but Hilary was quite comfortable in her jeans and sweater. She wore no bra under
her sweater. She usually didn't need one, and quite frankly she liked the feel
of a sweater, scratchy, and teasing against her nipples, which had to be her
most sensitive erogenous zone.

     Maybe Jaclyn wouldn't notice she was late, maybe she could just slip in
without Jaclyn noting the time. Hilary let herself into the spacious house with
the key she was given a couple of weeks before. She was right about how she
would feel upon reaching Jaclyn's, ok, not panting maybe, but trembling  anyway.
It was dark and  quiet in the foyer, she closed the big door behind her as
quietly as possible, tip toed to put down her purse and keys.

     "Hilary!, Hilary! Jaclyn's voice rang out. "Come in here".

     "Damn" Hilary breathed as she followed Jaclyn's voice. She found Jaclyn
ensconced on the sofa in the large living room. Hilary put on the most non
chalent smile she could muster.

     "Your late"!

     "I'm sorry, I...."

     "Your sorry what"! Jaclyn demanded.

     "I'm sorry mistress" Hilary responded flustered.

     "No excuses, you've just earned yourself another spanking young lady".
Hillary's stomach dropped, but her heart soared.

     "Now take off your top"! Hilary complied quickly, feeling a sexual rush in
her bare belly and a trickle of perspiration under her arm.

     "Well at least your nipples are obedient" Jaclyn said mockingly. Of course
they were hard already, and they seemed to tighten more as Jaclyn commented on
them.

     "Come here and kneel facing away from me". Hilary bare from the waist up
faced away from Jaclyn, and knelt back on her heels, her bare back pressing
against the couch upon which Jaclyn sat. Hilary felt her breathing quicken.
Jaclyn's hands passed on either side of her, and then she felt Jaclyn's fingers
on her nipples. Hilary bit her lower lip.

      Jaclyn teased and rolled the erotic nubs back and forth.

     "God, these really do stay hard" Jaclyn teased. Hilary tried not to moan.

     "I guess that makes you quite a slut, Doesn't it?" Jaclyn continued to
flick her nipples back and forth back and forth.

     "Am I right Hilary"? Jaclyn asked mockingly.

     "Yes" Hilary answered breathlessly.

     "Yes what" Jaclyn continued, "Use complete sentences".

     "Yes I'm a slut" Hilary responded her face blushing , her nipples seeming
to harden and tingle from the humiliation even more. Jaclyn laughed.

     "Ok slut I'm going to amuse myself with your hard little buds for awhile,
and while I do, you are to remain completely still. Still! No movement at all.
Every time you squirm, gasp, wiggle, jump, or even quiver too much it'll mean 10
cracks of the paddle across your bare ass in addition to the 2 spankings you've
already earned".

     "Understand"?

     "Yes" Hilary said in a small voice

     "Good".

     Hilary steeled herself as she knelt. Jaclyn hummed  as she worked and
tickled and teased Hillary's nipples. Hilary tensed every muscle in her body,
bit her lip, stared at the ceiling, but it wasn't long before her knee twitched.

     "Thats 10" . Hilary promised herself to do better. She bit her lip harder,
tried to think of anything other than Jaclyn's teasing....., Jaclyn's
fingers........., her nipples......

     "Ummmm" a gasp escaped Hillary's lips.

     "Thats 20 " Jaclyn said merrily. Damn, thought Hilary as Jaclyn's fingers
continued their maddening play. How long could she stand this? Perspiration had
broken out on her forehead, her tense muscles had begun to quiver. Hillary's
knees twitched spasmodically.

     "Thats 30".

     Hilary gave a small cry in her throat. 30 cracks of the paddle was nothing
to sneeze at especially as only a part of a spanking and Jaclyn was still
playing her cruel game. The teasing and arousal were too much. Hilary knew she
wouldn't be able to stay still much longer and then she would only increase her
punishment. Hillary's eyes began to tear, she began to feel some panic as a wave
of perspiration and desire washed over her, and her body trembled like a leaf.
Just then Jaclyn stopped.

     "Ok thats enough, get up now". It took Hilary a  second to get her
breathing under control and shakily stand up. She had begun to perspire, and her
chest had begun to flush. Her nipples tingled and seemed to vibrate, as if an
electrical current had passed through them  connected right to her groin.

     "Alright Hilary since I had to wait for you I feel like being entertained
now. So you'll strip naked for me". Hilary automatically fumbled with the top of
her jeans.

     "No! Not like that !, Jaclyn stopped her. "I said entertained Hilary"!

     "Your going to strip, and dance, and do your very best to entertain me and
arouse me while doing it, or else".

     "But, but I don't know how........." Hilary responded defensively..

     "Yes, yes I know, your not trained as a dancer but as a model, but your
going to WORK, your hardest to do a good job, because you have absolutely no
choice. Now go over and turn the CD player on. Resignedly, Hilary went across
the big room to the stereo.  

     "Alright get back here." Jaclyn ordered after Hillary had put on the CD.

     "No, no, get on the table slut". Hilary blushingly stood in the center of
Jaclyn's coffee table.

     "Ok start". The music played, Hillary swayed slightly standing on the table
wearing her jeans and casual shoes, unsure what to do.

     "Alright I'll tell you what to do" Jaclyn admonished.

     "Start with your arms over your head". Hilary raised her arms all the way
up lifting her naked breasts.

     "Now sway your hips". Hilary did.

     "Thats good get into it, feel it". Hilary did her best moving more
sensuously.

     "Now play with your nipples for awhile". They were still tingling and
aching for attention and despite her face coloring  at the lewd exhibition,
Hilary was glad to drop her hands from above her head and finger them awhile,
immediately being awarded with stabs of pleasure in her groin.

     "Now run your hands over your tingling wet crotch." Again although
embarrassed, Hilary was glad to do so.

     "Keep your hips swaying", Jaclyn admonished. "Keep moving to the music, Get
into it Hillary, I want a 100% effort from you or else". Hilary did her best to
do so swaying ever more sensuously. Concentrating on following Jaclyn's exact
instructions as she swayed and moved, and the music played.

     "Now just finger the waist band of those jeans".

     "Thats right, now slide your fingers in a bit". Hilary did feeling her
silky skin and the denim.

     "Come on turn around slowly I want a 360 degree show".

     "Ok go back to your nipples now".

     "Slide your hands down your belly make it sensuous". Hillary's hands slid
over the slight, tanned six pack of her abs.

     "Cup your crotch".

     "Undo the  your jeans". Hillary's slim fingers popped open the snap.

     "Keep your hands moving tease the waist band".

     "Now move your hands over your belly, come on, smooth that flat belly make
it sexy". Hilary half closing her eyes tried her hardest.

     "Good girl..............

     "Waistband and belly, sway sensuously, turn slowly, do a good job."
Hillary's eyes closed as she listened to, and complied with Jaclyn's voice.

     "Now legs far apart, start a slow bump and grind". Hilary on the table
complied, her hips slowly undulating.

     "Do it good, like your fucking, I know you know how to do that, and give
your nipples some attention". Hilary bit her lip at the insult, but carried out
the desired motion with her hips and hands.

     "Good, now ever so slowly lower the zipper on your jeans."

     Hillary continued her slow bump and grind, bare from the waist up, her
jeans undone teasing her tight nipples.

     "Now Hilary your going to get your jeans down. BUT ONLY BY WIGGLING YOUR
PERT ASS OUT OF THEM. Don't touch them, don't push them down, just wiggle and
shake your ass. Turn sideways to me." Hilary did.

     "Good, keep swaying, slowly bumping and grinding,smoothing your belly,
touching your nipples. As Hillary did her undone jeans crept ever so slightly
over the prominent points of her hip bones.  NOW, DANCE AND WIGGLE YOURSELF OUT
OF YOUR JEANS, MY LITTLE SLUT!!" Hilary did her best, but the jeans moved down
only slightly.

     "There's a time limit honey, I'm going to count to 20, and when I reach
there I want to see those jeans fall, just from your photo perfect ass wiggling,
or you'll really be in trouble. One, two......

     Hilary jiggled her ass  more vigorously, sucked in her belly and banged her
pelvis back and forth, shook her hips from side to side. She was getting quite
desperate, then she found by standing on the balls of her feet and doing all
those actions at once her unfastened jeans slowly crept down over her hips.
Jaclyn continued her count. It was going to be close, Hilary really had to
concentrate on her movements and strive, but she managed to wiggle her hips and
thighs out of her jeans, and they fell down her long legs just as Jaclyn counted
20.

     "Good !" Jaclyn complimented. Hilary only wore a g-string  under her jeans.
"Now really wiggle in your G-string, for a while, WORK your belly and ass.
WORK!". Hilary needed no more encouragement, the concentrated movements of
getting the jeans down, and all the sexual play had left her yearning to move,
and she fairly lept to slam her ass and pelvis back and forth and shimmy as if
she had stepped on a live wire.

     "Hee, Hee, Hee" Jaclyn chuckled," very good my little slut. But, now, 
stop, and go back to being slow and sensuous".

     Hilary had begun to sweat, her perfectly styled hair was coming undone, she
was now swaying in front of Jaclyn, nude except for her G-string. And she was
very aroused by the exhibition. She knew the crotch of her tiny G-string was
soaking wet. She hoped, against hope Jaclyn wouldn't notice.

     " Run your hands up and down your body", Hillary's body moved to meet her
touch. 

      "Thats right arch your pelvis out in that cute little G-string." Jaclyn
teased.

     " Now run your hands over that wet crotch my little slut". Hilary did and
pressed her lips together noticeably to keep from moaning at the sensation.

     "Hee , hee, hee" Jaclyn chuckled.

     "Alright turn around show me that tight ass of yours". Hilary turned and
kept swaying.

     "Bend over slut, run your hands over it". Hilary complied feeling a rush of
embarrassment and sexual electricity as her hands ran over the buttocks she
worked so hard to keep firm and strong.

     "Good, good, stick it out keep swaying....thats right do it good".

     "Ok Hilary turn around."

     "Get your thumbs hooked in your g-string" Hilary got her thumbs hooked
under the thin elastic band of the tiny garment.

      "Stretch it out from side to side." With her thumbs Hilary stretched the
elastic band out from her right hip out from her left.

     Come on play with it, move your hands around, keep in time with the music".
Hilary played with the waist band of the g-string she was stretching out.

     "Now really stretch it out to each side, farther all the way, good!"

     "Now! let it snap back! Jaclyn demanded. Hilary did the elastic stinging
her flesh hard enough to make her gasp. Jaclyn laughed. Again Hilary felt her
face flush in embarrassment "Now play with your nipples arch out your pelvis."
Hilary did tweaking, teasing, and rolling her hardened nipples,  for about 15
seconds, sending jolt after jolt ot teasing pleasure to the spot still covered
by her wet  g-string between her trim legs.

     "OK run your hands on that tingling crotch". Hilary wanted nothing more,
and felt a lurch of desire and quivered as she did so.

     "Good keep it up", Hilary ran her hands over and over the tiny patch of
fabric barely covering her hot pubis between her toned thighs. She had to bite
her lower lip to keep from moaning as she massaged the mound of her pussy
through her g-string.

       "Now just with your thumbs start slowly working your g-string down,
slowly." Hilary complied it seemed to take forever before the clingy scrap was
off and down her long legs.   After the long slow erotic display Hilary suddenly
felt a rush of erotic excitement and freedom, at finally having her pussy
uncovered and  at being totally naked.  

     "Now!  STOP! Stand in front of me..... hands behind your neck......., legs
spread wide.......Wide I said........" Strangely Hilary now found it hard to
stop moving and stand still. Her body was racing, warmed and tingling all over.
She felt air moving between her spread thighs, and over her smooth  vulva, trhat
due to her modeling work and Jaclyn's instructions she kept totally free of the
slightest hair. She idealy wondered if her erect and yearning clit was visible..

     "Good girrrrrl.....". Jaclyn purred, Hilary felt an ashamed rush of pride
at the mocking compliment. 

     "Now get down." Hilary was glad to step naked from the table even if doing
so did caused unsteadying jolts of arousal between her legs as her thighs moved.

     "Were now  going to do it all over again......., because I think you can do
better." Hillary's eyes widened  in surprise.

     "Go to the stereo, restart the disc, and put your jeans and g-string back
on."

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