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Part 1

Coughing from the dust as the brunette picked up a box from the Attic, taking it down...for the movers to move into her new apartment. Her emerald eyes sparkled as she glanced around...before she got into Her car...slowly noticing something in her small tote bag...a book. It was called Cruel Submissions: Finding out who you truly are" slowly she started to flip the pages...opening to see a submissive female on the first page...a drawing "In a Land far away...there is a place that shows who are the ones to rule. But they are all chosen at birth. Even on earth it is chosen who will rule and who will submit before they are born...only they don't see it and they never will" read the brunette aloud, as she stopped. Noticing a figure coming closer to her....throughout the shadows. Who was it?

Zachary turned his blue eyes to his girlfriend, Lana...worried as he stepped towards the car door...rolling his eyes, wondering what was Wrong with her.

"Babe, are you okay?" he asked glancing her over as she set the book Aside.

"Sweetie, I am fine...don't worry about me," she said softly. Why did She always have to fall for the wimpy guys? Why couldn't someone Strong ever come for her...someone who could dominate her? Slowly she turned around knowing why because she was the sweet good college graduate, secretary...who always had to please everyone...and hide her Desires within. Slowly Zach leaned over to kiss her, concerned as she glanced away trying to hide her boredom...wondering if a place like This truly existed. Slowly she turned away from him.

"Do you ever wonder if you could be somewhere else?" she asked softly looking away.

"No...because as far as I know I love you" he said not answering the Question, just being in the moment. Slowly she felt his hand reach away from her.

"Babe I got to go, don't forget the party"

In the back of her mind she was wondering...what the book meant...rolling her eyes she put it aside and drove to the apartment knowing it was silly a fiction novel couldn't tell what would happen. Could it?

Later on that night, the brunette walked to the house, ringing the door Bell...knowing this was the right house, because how rowdy it was. slowly she walked in, meeting up with Zach...suddenly moving into the corner and sitting down...wondering what she has been for the past day. Suddenly a frame came over to her...very powerful...and dominating just by his presence.

"Ah I found you...Miss. Lana Delaney" he said looking her over, just His glance made her eyes go to the floor. As she watched him she Stood up...

"Please, I don't believe we've met. Is there any way I can help you?" She asked softly, trying not to show how intimidated she was. Ignoring her question, she felt his hand reach to her hair...feeling it, exploring her body. "Stop! Please!"

"You are born to submit" she heard him said.

She felt his hand run through her hair, on to her cheek and Down the front of her chest. Her eyes closed, her breathing was becoming rapid as she felt his hand slide past her breasts and on to her stomach. Just then she felt a tap on her shoulder. "Lana, are You ok?", it was Zach. Opening her eyes and noticing that the Stranger was not there. "Umm, yes.....I am ok.", she replied. She wasn't sure if it all in her mind or if the stranger was really there. It felt so real when he touched her. All night at the party she watched and waited for the stranger to show up again, but he never did.

After the party she told Zach that she wasn't feeling good and wanted to go home and go to bed. She drove straight home and thought about the stranger the whole ride. She couldn't figure out what he meant by 'You were born to submit'. When she got home she got ready for bed and tried not to think about him any more, but the harder she tried, the more she would think about him. She found herself laying there in her bed, staring at the ceiling. That is when she remembered about the book that she found the other day. 'Even on earth it is chosen who will rule and who will submit Before they are born' it said. She decided that she was just day dreaming and that the book must have been on her mind and triggered The day dream. Lana closed her eyes and fell asleep.

A few days have past and she had not thought of the stranger until she was shopping. Lana was standing there trying to pick out a new skirt to go with the top that she had already picked up, when She felt a hand on her shoulder. She could feel his warm breath on her ear and neck as he spoke "I see I have found you again Miss Lana Delaney." She wanted to turn around, but for some reason she couldn't. His voice did something to her, made her feel like a small child. He spoke again, "You were born to submit....... and I was born to rule you." His hand slowly started to slide down her chest and into her shirt. Her breath began to get harder and faster As his hand touched her breast. "Are you OK Miss?" a voice came From next to her. Lana realized that she was standing there with her own hand on her breast, as it rose up and down from her hard breathing and a sales woman was staring at her. Again the woman asked, "Are you ok Miss? Do you need some help?". Lana quickly dropped her hand and said, "Yes, I am ok. Thank you." She placed the top that she had in her hand on a shelf and left the store.

When she got to her car, she fumbled for her keys and Unlocked the door. Before getting in she looked around to see if the stranger was around, but no luck. Lana got in her car and sat there for a few minutes trying to slow her breath and figure out What just happened. As she sat there, she noticed that her panties are a little wet and her nipples were hard. She couldn't figure out how or why this stranger could make her excited with just his touch and voice. She got herself together and decide she was going to go home and read more of that book.

Lana felt her finger tips touch the books pages as she went to the next chapter...It was called the Claiming. "If you are the slave, whoever is the one to claim you will not only want your body, but also Your mind and soul. If you try to fight him, he will find a way to get you. A true slave can't run from who she truly is but the claiming could drive her crazy...but in the end she will submit...this process hasn't failed with any slave yet." she said Aloud reading through the book. Stubbornly she set the book down determined not to let it bother her as she fell into a light sleep.....She saw the dark stranger in front of her. "Please stop, I don't want this" she said softly...scared as he watched her with his Powerful glance.

"You don't have any choice...it has been done your future, fate is Mine too choose. Try to run all you can from this, but that will only drive you crazy" he said laughing...touching her with his powerful Hands once again. "Soon you will be ready to join my world"

She tried to wake herself, knowing this could only be a Dream, but couldn't. She felt his strong hands move over her body, Touching every inch. She couldn't move, it was like her hands and Feet were tied to the bed, but she could not see any restraints. All she could do is watch as the stranger moved his hands down her Body. Over her breasts and down her stomach, her breathing once Again started to get heavy. She wanted to let him touch her but at the same time she didn't. She struggled some more, but still could not break free. His hands now on her thighs pushing them Apart. "No please, don't" she begged. "I can and will do what I Want with you, for you will be a part of me and I an apart of you." He responded with a confident voice. As she looked down, she noticed that she was completely naked, arms above her head and legs spread apart. She knew that he could what he wanted with her because she could not move, in a way she wanted him to take her.

The stranger leans over her body and stares into her eyes, His lips getting closer to hers. She closes her eyes and waits for Them to touch, but it never happens. Instead she feels his warm breath on her neck and hears him whisper in her ear, "You will Submit to your body, heart and soul to me. As I am destined to be Your Master and you my slave." This scares her and she begins to struggle again, sitting straight up and yelling "NO!!!".

The room is dark, the only light is coming from a street light outside her window. Sitting up in bed, Lana is covered in Sweat and can feel her heart beating very fast and hard. She reaches over and turns on the lamp besides her bed, the warm glow from the light hurts her eyes for a few minutes as she tries to Adjust to it. "What the hell is happening to me?", she says out Loud as if someone else could hear her. She looks down to see that she is dressed again in her T-shirt and panties, her nipples are Hard and this time her panties are soaked with her juices. Thinking to herself, "Who is this stranger and how is getting into my Dreams?". She gets up out of the bed, the carpet feel cool against her bare feet as she walks over to the dresser. Pulling out a new t- shirt and another pair of panties she takes a look around the room before changing, still wondering who this strangers is and why he Chose her. After changing her clothes, she walks to the bathroom To get a drink of water and returns to her bedroom. Sitting back down on her bed, she sips at the water, trying to figure out if she Is going crazy, or if this is really happening to her.

She finishes the glass of water and climbs back into bed, reaches over to shut out the light, but decides to leave it on. As she lays there, she can still feel his presence in the room, his Hands on her body, his voice in her ears. This time it is more of a soothing feeling, one that makes her close her eyes and fall fast Asleep.

Julian calmly watched her from the distance as she slept in his world Knowing that in time she will obey...and learn. Learn she couldn't lose who she truely was...calmly...he stood their naked feeling his Dick hardening thinking of what it would be like when he finally Trained her enough to join him here. As he took a sip of his wine, he Knew that Lana only could sleep so calmly because of him.

As Dawn came Lana finally opened her eyes, waking up feeling something on the bedside next to her a rose...the thorn going into her finger making her bleed...a note under it said "MINE FOR ALWAYS" Lana shook Her head as the door opened.

"Darling where did you get the rose?" asked her mother with a gentle Smile Lana watched her startled... "You see it? You actually see it? "

"Darling, your job called they don't need you today...you should stay In bed and around the house...you look tired" she said. Lana nodded lying back down picking up the book next to her reading the next chapter called..."The Submissions"

Continuing through the book Lana found herself reading through the book details for details...as she noticed a figure coming towards Her. "Lana, you look like your not quite ready, but soon you will be.....soon you will beg for me to take you as my slave "he said with A sadistic smile.

"No never" she whisper her emerald eyes pleading to him...wondering if he was for real or only a dream. When would she tell the difference between dreams and reality again?

Storming in Willow raced towards the chambers that her brother has Remained in, quickly she raced towards his chambers, glaring at him. He knew immediately that he had done something to anger her, but he Didn't know what it was. Her long red hair which flames reminded him of the fire spirited that she held within, her blue eyes sparkling Like the rivers as she took a few steps closer to him.

"What have you done, Julian? If anyone on earth finds out about how our world has slaves and owners for them, it may come down to chaos. Besides your breaking one of the major rules." she snapped at him, but He knew her. She wouldn't shut up until she had gotten everything out That was on her mind.

"Oh little Sister, I am just playing with the mind of the girl... you know how humans are." he said with a charismatic smile, quite the Charm that could make any woman fall for him. Willow eyed him knowing That Julian has been different, something has changed within him.

"But something has changed, the mystical beams senses it. You care for the girl, you want her...you desire her...as in more than a slave" She said softly, glaring at him knowing that she was right about that.

"Sister, who are you jesting...how could I like someone like that? She can't even control her own temptations and dreams, look at her." he said as their eyes went to the screen showing the beautiful brunette As she stared up into the stars. Julian knew that his elder sister was very Leary about the rules that a council has made up, a bunch of Politicians...who made every law that was around within this world.

"You can't hide the fact that you feel for her...your desires are Going for her. You'd die for her...protect her at any cost." she Accused to him, as he glared at her knowing that she was correct.

"Yes, one does that for something he will own" he says bitterly. Finally on the screen the young man known as Zach appeared as his hazel colored eyes glanced around as in a daze....a smile appeared on Willow's face as she watched him appear.

"Who is that young fellow?" she asked with a small grin. Julian rolled his eyes sick of that young fellow...in no form was he a man. He was just a weak boy who thought he could get any human female, but He truly had no idea...what his lover was truly like.

"Why? You don't happen to have a liking to that weakling, do you?"he Asked half joking with a very humorous way to the situation.

"Of course not, I don't fall for humans unlike some people, but who is He?" she asked with curiosity hinting within her voice. Julian Smiled good naturedly....as he found a plan forming within his mind.

"So sister, you think you could dominate his soul?" he asked with a smile forming onto his lips.

"Of course, any man could be dominated very easily" she said in a quick response.

"I will make a bet with you, Willow." he said slowly, hoping she could go along with it.

"What kind of bet?" she asked cautiously.

"Well you think you could make him your slave and I think I could make Lana mine. How about who ever is able to...turns out to be the better...one..it will show the argument we've been having since we Were in diapers. About whether men are the dominant ones or women."he said with a smile crossing his lips.

"What are the turns?" she asked, watching him wondering if her dear Brother was up to his old tricks.

"Well who ever turns out being the better...one as in the one who can Dominate Lana or Zach. It proves that one is meant to rule...which Means...if I win you will become my slave...for as long as I wish. And if you win I will be yours for as long as you wish" he said.

"Fine, I am making one rule for this bet though...you can't fall in love with the person. Agreed?" she asked softly knowing that would in The end make the game harder.

"Agreed" he said, a wide smile appearing on his face.

"Then let the games begin" she said cheerfully as she headed out of The chambers, knowing that it was going to be a beautiful day. What Will happen next? Will they be able to win Lana and Zach's soul? Will Lana be able to excape? Is Julian falling in love for her? How will Zach react to knowing he is part of the game? Only time can tell. Slowly the young man known as Zach stood by the tree...glancing into Lana's window,wondering what was wrong with her. She hadn't been herself for the last few days which was worrying him. She was always the kind of girl who...always paid attention to getting ahead of everyone and suceeding through her life. But now, she had seemed more distant...more reserved. So unlike herself,slowly he walked towards the house...noticing how dark the house seemed.

Opening the door,surprisingly finding it open as he entered,noticing how quiet it seemed all around. Following the hallway through the kitchen finding his way to where Lana's mother left some notes. He found a note that catched his eyes immediately,wondering what it was for.

"The pain rings...through your eyes and your heart. You can save the one you truly love without the pain. You have to give into your calling" he read that aloud,wondering what the words would mean within. Did it mean something about Lana? What the hell has happened to her? Slowly Zach started to make his way up to her room,wondering what was wrong.

"Lana? Are you here? " he asked worried,letting his voice be heard as he continued through the house until he got to her room,easily finding the door locked. He heard the soft moans and whimpering from her room,as he continued banging on the door,trying to get in wondering who was there with her. Has someone else won her attention? Was that why she was being so distant towards him?

Surprisingly the door suddenly opened,almost like magic...as he walked in noticing his love...His Lana. She was bare naked,asleep so peacefully...with one of her soft hands carressing her large breasts,with the other hand fingering her trimmed cunt quickly...her emerald sea like eyes closed. "No! Julian! I need you....I need to please you....please! Help me surrender completely! Please! This is torment!"

Zach couldn't believe his eyes or his own ears, Lana has never talked or moaned like this before in the past. Slowly he kneeled down next to her bed,knowing nothing would tear him away from her bed side. God, what was doing this to her? His love and his hope?

Meanwhile,else where Julian watched this from where he sat on the video,as a smile appeared onto his face knowing he had to do something to make sure he won this bet with his guillable sister. Slowly his servant Callista with the chains upon her wrists bought in the bowl of grapes. "Kneel,girl...you don't deserve to sand....feed them to me"

Callista fell to her knees,unable to glance up at her Master,knowing better than to defy him. Her eyes looking over at the screen briefy,feeling pain for the young man knowing things would be very different for him and the girl...when Julian would take them away from everything they have come to love and known. "My Lord, Mistress Willow...has told me brother that...she is going to send a Lanianc to the earth to claim the boy." she said softly,knowing the warrior that Lanianc was.

"Hmm,that does draw a problem,doesn't it? I guess I will have to do what I normally do when my sister gets in my way, don't I?" he asked with a smirk,knowing that this girl was well trained...but too obediant...not enough spirit for him to deal with. Lana on the other hand had so much to offer and he would win her as his own from anyone who dared. Slowly he traced his hand against Callista's soft breast...as he let her place a grape into his mouth.

"What is that, M'Lord?" she asked in such a soft voice,almost as soft as the bells one would hear for a wedding.

"When I want something done, I will have to do it myself. This Zach....is pathetic. He won't mind letting me take over for awhile...besides I have to win Lana,anyways. She willl learn who she belongs to...in any sense of the word. " he said with a laugh...slowly closing his eyes preparing himself. Callista watched him her eyes widening fear knowing not even a strong woman could resist Julian's charms and good looks.

In Lana's room, Zach felt something...something that made him feel very lightheaded...grabbing his small dick, feeling it semi hard,as he felt lightheaded,finally a grin appeared onto his face. Slowly Lana,opened her eyes noticing her lover right in front of her as she sat up. "Zach, what are you doing here? What's wrong? Did something happen?"

Lana looked up at him,noticing the lustful look within his deep eyes,wondering what was wrong as she questioned him. Slowly she felt his hand feeling so powerful against her large breasts...lying it there,twisting her nipples...so hard. "Who do these belong to?"

"They.....they are my breasts" she said softly,but in response she heard a sadistic laugh that reminded her too much of the man of her dreams. Feeling him only twist them harder,then biting into them with his teeth clearly knowing what he was doing.

"No Lana,your wrong...a slave owns nothing" he said with a laugh,noticing her eyes widen. Smiling knowing who he was....truly was sinking into her mind....as she struggled,still trying to fight him...her small hand trying to reach towards her bathrobe...but Julian was blocking it from her. She would have to go past him to find herself able to hold onto it.

"Zach your....not him!" she cried out as she tried to struggle past him to get her pathrobe,her emerald eyes full of fear. Trying to get past him,but feeling him pick her up,pushing her across his lap. Carressing her soft ass cheeks,with a sadistic smile going across his face.

"It doesn't matter who I am...you will submit!" he yelled as she struggled,feeling a firm hand spank her ass cheeks hard and fast,as tears streamed down her face. Tears streamed down her face,feeling his rough hands continuing to spank her...as tears continued to stream down her face.

"Stop please! I will obey! I will! I will do everything you wish!" she cried out helplessly,trying to hold her ass cheeks back,carressing them but she was unable to.

"That is a good girl. Now who will you yearn to please?" he asked...as he continued to spank her hard and rough against the ass cheeks,as she whimpered softly. Julian knew she would give in by the new night,as he continued to carress her asscheeks,knowing when she came to his world he wouldn't have to take on the form of a pathetic worm.

"My Master and Lord!" she cried out,softly....as she felt his hands on her securely,feeling more and more free...as her tears streamed down her face.

"Is Zach your Master?" he asked with a smirk appearing onto his face. Lana didn't know who was but she knew it wasn't Zach, it was someone else...the man within her dreams. But who was he?

"No, but I don't know who my master is" she said softly,feeling his hands moving down her ass cheeks almost carressing her. Yearning more of his touch as she tried to move closer to the small dick,needing more of his power and touch within.

"That isn't for you to know...but you want to please your Master,don't you...pet?" he asked,letting his hand go through his new slaves hair,knowing by the time he was through with her she would never question her submission again.

"Yes More than anything, Master! How may this girl please you?"

"Well tomorrow you will get some things for your Master,his voice will be inside your head....you will know better than to refuse,won't you?" he asked...knowing she would try to fight him,but wouldn't be able to at all.

"Yes Master"

Slowly she felt Zach pushing her off of him,surprised to see the position he was holding her in as he gave her a confusing look. Lana backed up,not knowing what to say as he held her within his loving ways,but she knew inner she needed more...desired more than what she had felt within with her love.

What will happen next?

Shall this be continued or will I leave you in wonder?


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