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The Family Feud
Author: Amanda Serve
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(Added on May 30, 2011)
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This is about the Taylors, Bill, Chris, Wendy and Jamie and the issues they need to work through. This story has a long build up, which I felt was necessary to add to the plausibility. You'll see as the women take charge of things, and maybe how life turns upside down more than once for everyone. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
hart_mut4711
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Jul 18, 2011 |
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Very nice plot. Would not get the high score as stand alone story, but is a necessary intro for the following sequel.
Some annoying typos. (8/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jun 8, 2011 |
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The story may have a slow build-up, one cannot deny that it is well written. Granting a four-score is in my humble opinion doing the story and the author a grave injustice; but that's why it is my opinion.
Me, I liked the build-up, because it serves the story just right, the slow pace isn't a slow pace to me, just a preliminary.
It's only a slow pace when you're impatient to get to the tasty bits.
Not going to add anything else, except that i think this is a wonderfully crafted piece of work written by a gifted author.
JJ (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
artlover
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Jun 2, 2011 |
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Interesting idea for a story but as the author points out the story is extremely slow in building and thus makes it easy to lose interest. I found I had to compel myself to keep reading believing that the story would eventually take hold - which it finally did. Excessive details detract from what could have been an exciting plot.
I did like the last chapters. Great potential but needs polish. (4/10)
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