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'Tis the Holiday Season
Author: Benfan
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(Added on Dec 22, 2007)
(This month 12501 readers) (Total 24849 readers) |
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A pair of submissives get into the holiday sprit. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
slave_amy
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Dec 27, 2007 |
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An excellent xmas story! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Benfan
(Edit) (Jan 3, 2008)
- Thanks for the kind words. This is just a little fantasy vignette I knocked out when I had a few free hours, I apologize for the typos and rough edges (I figured it was better to post before xmas than hold it for proofreading) and am glad people like the sparse style. I've submitted another vignette with Holly and Jasmine which should be posting shortly. With the cooperation of the muse we may see them again now and then with more details revealed in each installment.
By the way, I should have tipped my hat to Musker, author of the Omens/Cornucopia series, for the title.
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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Dec 26, 2007 |
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Well, it's good to see you back at it. I agree with the other reviewers that this is a very good tale. However, I felt it lacked some of what your others stories have and left me a bit on the flat side - I am, of course, judging you against you. Consider that a complement, while also considering it a fault of mine that I judge you against you. (9/10)
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blmished
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Dec 24, 2007 |
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This is a great piece of work. I love the way it demonstrates the author's ability to switch to a very different story scale and pull it off with such excellence.
The elements of the story combined very well to achieve this complete and rounded feel. The characters were given just enough depth to fit them squarely into the roles they were applying. It was amusing how the submissives were so well-trained. The Dominant, was also a very humorous character, and to the accompanying sound track, it made a great read early on Christmas morning. Colour was used well in providing a visual aspect, and the overall description was concise, horny and had a seasonal glaze, well used to help those with a lazy imagination.
So, let's all try to convince the author to make us more of these images, these vignettes are a great addition to the longer, more serious work.
And maybe somewhere down the line, we may see these people again?
Well, I love all your work and by your numbers, its clear that others agree. Good luck and thank you for this wonderful story. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
kimmi
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Dec 24, 2007 |
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Merry Christmas benfan.....you have been very good this year.
You get a 10 (10/10)
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