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Just a Visit to the Beach
Author: Master Si
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(Added on Dec 1, 2007)
(This month 45585 readers) (Total 88016 readers) |
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A collaborative story from a real life Master and slave, written to reflect the alternate views of both as Ev is taken into slavery from the first time. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (9/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
gypsiecowboy
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Aug 31, 2008 |
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whew! what a fantasy; I want to meet Ev and Rika. so many people are into Gor that the references added rather than distracted. well done. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
aznlookinguy
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Aug 30, 2008 |
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Too hot to be true. Or is it? Part of it is true, I know! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
gwen101
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Feb 25, 2008 |
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Story gives a great introspective into the character of a sub from her viewpoint and that of her master. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Dec 24, 2007 |
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very good story, well written, great flow (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
ramses
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Dec 16, 2007 |
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Very well written story. It combines my two favorite fantasies: BDSM and Asian women. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Sam Blythe
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Dec 7, 2007 |
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Excellent. Cant wait for more. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
steph2004ster
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Dec 2, 2007 |
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Exciting start to this story. The reference to Gor is fascinating. Very juicey! Keep it up! (9/10)
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