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Hotel room
Author: Papa Vegas
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(Added on Mar 29, 2007)
(This month 9062 readers) (Total 20273 readers) |
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A young woman realises her fantasy by visiting a Master in his hotel room |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
lattes&lace
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May 3, 2007 |
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I very much enjoyed reading this story. I didn't see any true problems with it. I'm most certainly hoping that there will be more to this! (8/10)
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tbear4759
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Apr 1, 2007 |
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a good start. the use of a blindfold would be nice. looking forward to more. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Mar 29, 2007 |
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I think had your story been in the third person rather than first person, it would have been tons better. I liked the theme and I like how he used her. I am hopeful the next chapters will be better. (5/10)
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