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Weighed
Average (?): (6/10) |
Average
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Highest
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Reviewer:
Curtis
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Dec 19, 2006 |
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I agree with mkemse this time. It's okay, not bad, mediocre. I think you need to write more and gain some experience so that you can change some of the 'she did this, then I did that' to more of a narrative. You did some of that with what the narrator was thinking, but there's a little too much distance and not enough emotional involvement here. It was a good idea, and not badly executed. I hope you try again. (6/10)
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Reviewer:
mkemse
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Dec 18, 2006 |
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had potential to be a realy hot story, with the theme and idea, but missed the mark still a good read (6/10)
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Reviewer:
Lee Boudine
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Dec 18, 2006 |
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Very good for a brief consensual story about a nice young couple. not really bondage play, but submission by the wife. The traditional concept of a marriage is that the wife should submit to her husband and the husband is to love his wife. (7/10)
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Reviewer:
Elkor
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Dec 17, 2006 |
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This appears to be a resubmit of the story from April 2006 by this author. Have there been changes? Quick glance of the first half doesn't show any significant changes... (5/10)
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