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Carlos\' Bitch Author: Incomplete
(Added on Mar 14, 2006) (This month 31436 readers) (Total 64678 readers)
Good girl Tina was abducted and blackmailed by two thugs

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Weighed Average (?): (6/10)
Average Rating: (6.5/10)
Highest Rating: (9/10)
Lowest Rating: (2/10)

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Reviewer: lonewolf8 (Edit) Rating: May 4, 2006
I'm loving this! But the updates are coming way too slowly!
Why hold back on such a great story?
We need more... much more! (9/10)

Reviewer: nikita (Edit) Rating: Apr 20, 2006
I agree with the formatting issue. It would have been easier to follow, but I worked through it and it was a good story...familiar type of thread with a few tweaks here and there. Please continue writing. (6/10)

Reviewer: slaveneedledick (Edit) Rating: Apr 1, 2006
Have to agree the format was poor.
Now that the formatting has been fixed the story is an excellent read. Hope to read more and I am glad the author took the advice of readers. (7/10)
Replied by: Incomplete (Edit) (Mar 14, 2006)
I use Opera as my browser and it looks fine on mine. Also, I emailed it to webmaster via pdf, and that's fine as well. Not blaming him, but maybe he can post it in pdf??? I hate getting blasted for formating when it's neatly spaced on the versions I work on.

Reviewer: Mad_Splitter (Edit) Rating: Apr 1, 2006
Now he formating has been fixed is very good hope you will continue with the story. (7/10)

Reviewer: chksng19 (Edit) Rating: Mar 16, 2006
Reformatted with second chapter. Not a bad story, a little familiar from so many retellings. Not much new about it. (6/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Mar 14, 2006
the layout of the story makes it justtoo hard to read, you must reformat it to make reading easier (2/10)

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