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Solar Woman – Solar Whore
Author: Sonya Esperanto
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(Added on Feb 24, 2006)
(This month 10500 readers) (Total 15804 readers) |
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About two superheroines who end up as unemployed, both in their heroine lives and the real, world, seek out to earn money any way they could, even if they had to become whores to a criminal gangster |
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Average (?):  (3/10) |
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Rating:  (2.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
rebelfan1
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Mar 1, 2006 |
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Ok, enough of the fantasy stories. They are poorly written and just taking up space. THEY ARE ALL THE SAME!!! (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Feb 25, 2006 |
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The story is a little to short and ends when it becomes interesting. The basic of the story is however good. Normally I would give it a 5, but I added 2 point to encourage Sonya. I felt, with all respect for the other scores a 1 is really low. Seems that some people only look this site as a litterary contest, while the first idea is "a story" for pleasure. But that is my opinion of course. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
H Dean
(Edit) (Mar 2, 2006)
- jip - Contrary to your opinion I do not believe that many reviewers view this site as a contest. I, for one, attempt to offer constructive thoughts for both the reader and the author. In this particular case, the author does not appear to care about the reading experience. I would suggest that your extra 2 points "for encouragement" does a diservice to any other honest review that you might make or may have already made. Incidentally, I am not upset by your comments. I merely thought they deserved a response since they tend to cast a negative light the comments which have been made regarding this author and her stories.
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| Reviewer:
castle2001
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Feb 24, 2006 |
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Ditto Dr Dean.
Sonia, please please take this criticism as an effort to help you be a better writer.
Write less. Think more. Make up your own characters. Use yourself or those around you.
If English is not your native language have your text edited.
You can do better. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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Feb 24, 2006 |
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After seeing a constant deluge of stories by this author I decided to inspect her work. The grammar and use of words in these stories makes it appear that this author is not a native speaker of English or she is in junior high school and enamored with comics. I've nothing against comics (I have a hell of a collection)or erotica involving comicbook characters. However, this story, and the other couple I perused, are not good. This author fails to treat the characters as if they are real, consequently the stories had no life and left me disinterested. Finally, considering the amount of stories coming from this author and the consistent lack of quality of the tales, I tend to think that this author just doesn't give a damn about crafting the stories. That is the most egregious error she has made. (1/10)
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