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Cemented
Author: Fetterer
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(Added on Aug 31, 2005)
(This month 50349 readers) (Total 69981 readers) |
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Although it doesn't happen, a woman is hired to do a snuff film, willingly enduring many trials along the way. Repeat: though snuff is mentioned frequently, it does not happen. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6/10) |
| Average
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| Reviewer:
LordVetinari
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Sep 2, 2005 |
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Overall, I enjoyed the story. I will disagree with the author slightly, however. While I think RL snuff would be a waste, fantasy snuff is erotic.Still and all, a good tale. (6/10)
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- Replied by:
Fetterer
(Edit) (Sep 2, 2005)
- Thank you for your comments.
Yes, that would be a possibility. Alas, my focus group gave hellfor even thinking of something like that :-)
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| Reviewer:
Grako
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Sep 2, 2005 |
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This was am interesting story with an unusual theme. At points it is very good but it would have been better if there was more resistance from Valerie at times. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Fetterer
(Edit) (Sep 2, 2005)
- I wanted to show a woman who had done bondage with her husband coming alive again, and so a certain eagerness was my intent. But thank you for your comments
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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Aug 31, 2005 |
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I truly hate to give such a low rating but I found this story to be quite unentertaining. The main character was rather lifeless and the plot a bit ridiculous. The style the author uses is awkward and sophomoric and the grammar and spelling could be improved. Despite my comments to the negative, I do hope that I have not been a discouraging factor for future writings. Your ideas are not so bad as much as they are not believable - that doesn't mean you can't make them so. (4/10)
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- Replied by:
Fetterer
(Edit) (Sep 2, 2005)
- When I posted this story, I was purposely seeking comments. I thank you for taking the time to comment.
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