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Night Vision
Author: Dee Driscoll
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(Added on Apr 5, 2004)
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A romantic one on one encounter spiced with mild d/s. One for the ladies... |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 7, 2010 |
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Confusing narrative, which had me, well, confused, if not all, then most of the time still.
But it's a strange kind of confusing, because the story is extremely well written, but the reader never really knows who --or what-- the narrator really is.
It's like the reader 'sees' everything through the focus of a smudged lense.
Descriptions of feelings and behavior are an example of how to go about such things.
Excellent.
JJ
Replied by Dee Driscoll (Jul 12, 2010)
I was basically just pissing about with this one. Should be read with one eyebrow raised for proper effect. Glad you liked it, though.
(10/10)
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| Reviewer:
bracemaiden
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Apr 10, 2004 |
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While sex from the eyes of a predatory wolf who thinks that "no" means "yes" was written well enough to be amusing this time, it needs to be kept the exception rather than the rule. (6/10)
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- Replied by:
Dee Driscoll
(Edit) (Apr 13, 2004)
- Oh, haha, you are very right. I discovered this one on my harddisk recently and laughed reading it, but decided to post it just for fun and to see what reactions might be. Thanks for reviewing it.
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