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Sybian Training
Author: Couture
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(Added on Oct 5, 2003)
(This month 27359 readers) (Total 45276 readers) |
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Megan's new boss has enrolled her in training - Sybian Training. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 7, 2010 |
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A few times along this read I heard some screeching tyres, where Couture took some rather tight curves a tad too quick, almost going off the road (the references to some laws and president Ashcroft --the latter also pointed out by Curtis, below) but overall this is another steamy affair.
Very nice.
JJ (9/10)
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Curtis
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Oct 16, 2003 |
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Hated the President Ashcroft stuff (though I acknowledge that you need some kind of social rationalization), but this is one HOT, well written story. (9/10)
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burger_01
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Oct 13, 2003 |
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Top read! oh man.. i can't wait for the next episode.. i'd say it had so much potential for a brilliant series, but its already brilliant! (9/10)
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Emily
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Oct 12, 2003 |
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Oh my god what an erotic read! I simply can't get that picture of Mr. Sybian out of my mind, nor can I ignore the wonderful humiliation that builds up on our heroine. Nicely done! (9/10)
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psychgurl69
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Oct 10, 2003 |
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Enjoyed reading very much. Hope to see more. (9/10)
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lex ludite
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Oct 8, 2003 |
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Very good effort so far. Hope there is more to come, in more ways than one. Was the machine cause for some of those rather bizarre lapses in proofreading? (8/10)
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S_Couture
(Edit) (Oct 9, 2003)
- Thanks. There wasn't really a lapse in proofreading. No more so than usual. It seems like the problems were caused when the picture was added. So in a way, I guess you could say that the Sybian was responsible after all.
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mkemse
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Oct 7, 2003 |
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has everything (10/10)
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woolfighter
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Oct 6, 2003 |
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You've got the points. It's a highly erotic story.Keep it up (that`s the difficult part) (10/10)
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redEva
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Oct 6, 2003 |
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i am not that picky on the grammar (nothing that proper Sybian training for Secretaries would not be able to take care of – I’m sure) and this does sound mmm mmmm good!
Yes, please, some more….
(10/10)
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Lord Douche
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Oct 6, 2003 |
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e.e said it. A few typo's and gramatical slip-ups, but apart from that, an excellent story. (9/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Oct 6, 2003 |
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I think that this is the first story to appear on this site based on the PAM Universe (Personal Assistant Magazine). Fortunately it is by Couture, an experienced and competent writer. If anybody wants more information by this fascinating future they should consult Georg's FAQ section on the thread PA Magazine.
Congratulations to both Couture and Georg! I think that you are onto something here. I must fire up my word processor and crank something out that uses Georg's PAM universe to my our C.P. fetishes. I love you folks.
Why a 9 rather than a 10. A few typo's and gramatical glitches slipped through. Otherwise a totally top job. As bccc90 opin'd a good sequel might change my review to a ten. Meanwhile, I have to start on my own homage to Geog! (9/10)
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S_Couture
(Edit) (Oct 9, 2003)
- Georg is one of the true greats. Almost always mentioned in the same breath as Parker. The PAMagazine universe is awesome and a great place to find inspiration.
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bccc90
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Oct 6, 2003 |
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It's been along time since I read a story that demands more chapters that just one. I hope that part II is coming soon. (9/10)
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crickette
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Oct 6, 2003 |
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I really enjoyed reading Sybian Training. I have never read a story before with that take on Women's Rights. I love your sense of humor. I do wish it was longer. A part II maybe ?????? (9/10)
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jbowler65
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Oct 5, 2003 |
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Once again, another excellent story. My only question is where can I get a sybian like this? But seriously, the author has a great ability to convey how the characters feel and in turn, how you would feel if you were in the character's position. (10/10)
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