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Tonight I'm Going to Party
Author: Fox
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(Added on May 17, 2003)
(This month 10317 readers) (Total 24930 readers) |
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My first fetish party turned out to be very sweet indeed! |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
bracemaiden
(Edit) |
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Jan 2, 2004 |
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Wonderful story – loved the consentuality check, the tightening of the gag reminding the reader later on, the flash from description to description of others at the party, the exhibition to unseen numbers of strangers, and the positive feel of the ending. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Fox
(Edit) (Jan 5, 2004)
- Thank you for your review. Comments from readers are always welcome and appreciated.
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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May 22, 2003 |
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You did a good job of staying inside the mind of the sub, also the setting (the party) was fully realized in incredible detail. There were a couple of places where I had to stop and puzzle out how something was happening (the technical details, or 'logistics'), but it didn't seriously detract. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Fox
(Edit) (May 23, 2003)
- Thanks for the kudo's. Please tell me where you had troubles working out the details. If I can improve the story, and my writing, I will gladly do so.
Cheers! Fox
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| Reviewer:
knotz2u
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May 21, 2003 |
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Very hot, I love stories where you give total control to the unknown. Thank you and I am looking forward to reading more of your work. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Fox
(Edit) (May 21, 2003)
- Thank you. I'll be sure to send you some chocolate in appreciation <G>
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| Reviewer:
bdsmbill
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May 21, 2003 |
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Very nice story. A good premise well followed. Sexy, but with no actual sex. (8/10)
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